Ooh so well done! Awesome metaphor. Amazing last line, too. And I love the unexpectedness of "there are passengers and there are drivers," leading to "I'm a passenger." That made me laugh. Also, I remember those commercials, so you instantly made me think of watching them in my home as a child! Anyway, I really enjoyed this!
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Date: 2016-11-27 12:51 am (UTC)