ext_7459 ([identity profile] roina-arwen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pixietastic 2013-03-10 10:46 pm (UTC)

Lots of emotion comes through here. Well done.

Just FYI, your last line should be "thrown over my shoulder" (not "should"), although the way I read it, it sounds like she left for work half naked!

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